just done with making my first blog page,these blogspot people are really fast(or is it my net connection)whateve' .......
right now nothing gr8 to post except this poem,really close to me.....this one was for valentines day,the yuk day(hmmmmm,,,,,,,,koi na mera wi time aeyga,abhi to "apa ne to majjje lene hain")
this one is for you bhupi(bhupinder senti singh) darling.....here i go.........
Here comes the day which is not mine,
as i dont have any valentine.
things happened in the past which are not fine.
rainy days for me even when the sun shine.
no girl to propose,
no aroma of rose,
no chance for my bike to give lift,
no special person to give gift.
no miss is there to miss no experience of kiss.
no dinner in the moon light.
no chance to have the day bright.
even though i dont fall in love i will always bow to love. wishing great time to ppl who are in love .........
i will join ur category you soon (expected time calculated : 53 years 6 months 23 days 14 minutes 22 seconds as told by my panditji....)
11 comments:
itna depressing kyun lag raha hai rather itna despo kyun hai
u will get the girl u like 1 day
nd i know she would b very lucky as she will b with the worlds nicest person who will care 4 her like hell. hope u find her soon
waise u hv many other friends like me who will stay always wid u
tc bye
swati
tis cool...
especially for once you seem like me lolz...
But seriously, u r gettin into the groove.... dheere dheere mere jaisa likhne lag jaayega j/k.....
The verse is fantastic (for a start)... make sure this is not the end, keep it up, make it the beginning, a beginning that never comes again.
U rock,,,, keep it goin, we're lovin it.
Adios
Sumit
smitz.pecobians.com
oye liar,bas kar,
i guess rendezvous bhool gaya tu???
chal koi na,u ll get many more chances,dnt regret.
n u ll get- dnt kno world's best but for sure luck gak as she ll have u(some1 whose company v all frnz cherish. saurabh u r d best,so
just wait patiently for ur valentine),gud luck.
tab tak majje le
Chuze jald hi tu hamari category se nikal jaayega aur jinke liye woh sab likha hai unki category mein aa jaayega. U'll surely have a valentine and probably the best girl coz the best deserve the best.
Take Care
doood .. you'll go a great distance in life.
cheers
bhul gaya apni DULHAN ko jiski shadi par rona start tha?
i am ur valentine don't forget me until u find ur young valentine BEST OF LUCK
BYE
NEENU MASI
SURAT
thanx for the dedication
... bhupi
ab to paper khatam yaar.. ab to blog update kar le vehle.
bhaiya kuch bhi !!!
vaise valentine walle poem is siraa.........mere to aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.
hw can u say u dont ve a valentine????? ve u 4gotten s n s???
oye mast yaar...
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